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Princess Found
by Arecee

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/21/10
Hi Arecee.
You're one of the best!

Comment by Bob on 05/18/08
The flash-forwards are very disconcerting.  Mrs. Collins is at home giving her daughter permission for a slumber party.  The the bailiff walks across the hall and says something about the jury.  Huh?  Where did a bailiff come from?  What jury?  This is long before the stabbing and even longer before the trial.  The same flash-forward occurs at the doctors office.  They only make sense if you read the story twice.

Comment by Beardy on 12/28/06
Story bubbling along nicely here.
I agree nothing really original going on, but well-written.
I don't see that these two chapters warrant super-xxx rating/warning.
The bad bits don't happen till the next installment...

Comment by Marcie  Lang on 09/18/06
Excpet for a few diffrences rhis story sounds just like the Gwen Aruajo story.This story was very well written and give you many kudios as I am also Transgendered myself,

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