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A Princess From Atlantis
by Amelia Allen

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Comment by Silvia on 06/21/10
I didn't like it.
Silvia.

Comment by Debbie on 11/14/08
Potentially am excellent story, great imagination! A bit hard to follow with all the repetition (chapter 2) and errors.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 05/06/04
Dear Amelia:

   Interesting and just getting going. Please continue, I will be looking for more. I think with more human interest you can have a real grabber here.

hugs,

Kristi

Comment by Chris W on 04/29/04
It is a good start to a series of stories, BUTT there are alot of typos. My sugestion is to reread the story then correct the mistakes. You say Rodin, then put she before or after talking about him. Remember you said that Arial and Robin are both there. So that would lead me to beleive that Robin is he, and Arial is she. Even though the body is now female. Other than that I like this story and eould love to read the next part. There has to be a next part because Arial is still on Earth!    



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