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The Princess, the Puppet and the Car
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Comment by Dylan on 09/30/14
I'm reading the whole story on kindle but I found here in the process (thank you) across the 3 books Comment by Cassie Ellen on 07/14/12 I really love your stories which are among the few I often reread. Comment by Sarah Bayen on 01/02/10
Comment by Angharad on 01/02/10 A very poignant tale very well told. Comment by grover on 03/28/09 I recently had this one recommended to me and it really touched me. What a unique and novel idea of a way to put this strange journey we are all on. A very very good story! Comment by Geoff on 04/09/05 I once thought I'd been given the wrong car, and I constructed a puppet to drive it for me. My puppet grew a beard to make it more difficult to decorate it like a princess. As the years went by I found that I began to like the the car I'd been given, especially when a special princess began to polish it lovingly, but I still had a hankering, from time to time, to let my old puppet take over so that I could sit in the back seat. There I kept a special place where I could pretend to decorate myself and found it helped me to get through my life as the body car slowed down and began to corrode. I read stories about pretend princesses, I even wrote one, and I enjoyed helping others to write - all in the back of my body car. Comment by Jenny Walker on 04/02/05 Sarah, Comment by Leah on 03/30/05 The rather oversimplification of using car rather than human PLUS interjecting the concept of the backseat driver who is the "real" car lends this story a peculiar illustrative power. This is easier to follow than the typical psychological jargon, thus conceivably more helpful in describing the difficult situation of being an unrecognized princess. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/29/05 Wonderful and sad at the same time. I cried. |
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