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The Princess Trap
by: Slothrop & Wanda Cunningham

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Comment by jenny on 02/19/10
GREAT STORY NEED MORE.PLEASE !
Comment by Molly on 04/18/08
Apparently 'The Princess Contest' was never written. Such a pity. This is one of Tyrone's lighter, happier tales -- many of his others are dark with pain and grief. One cannot help but like the twins in this story, and wish to see more of them.
Comment by rone welles on 01/16/07
 wow what a great story a lot of action ... the plot was exceptional
and done to perfiction ....  your work is going to be world class''
talent and brains  ,,,,,what a writer/author ...bravo... more...

thank you  XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXO    rone :)

Comment by Rone welles on 01/16/07
   Not bad at all  ...  almost a complete story well worth reading..
sometimes sidelined if you keep up with the story line it is a wonderful story and left a place for book two ..giggle ... hoping for that ... well done good and faithful writer...well done...

thank you XOXOXXO  rone :)

Comment by Heather on 09/10/06
Great story a bit confuseing at times giggle giggle but wonerfully written and enjoyed.  Not too much girly over explained details, a bit of romance and cold easily be real life.

Thank you

Comment by Wanda on 01/12/05
This story was posted on BigCloset first and is now on FictionMania and TopShelf. ;>

Wanda
Comment by Pippa K. on 11/15/04
Is this a rewrite/repost of a prior version of this story?  I know I've seen it before, and I think it was here, several months ago.  Anyway, it's STILL a great story, and either through editing or through fond memories, it's better than ever.


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