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Priscilla
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Aleesha on 07/01/09
I have normally given you a 9/10 or better for your stories but this one was not quite up to scratch.I wasn't expecting the twist at the end but you do have a good imagination.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07
Mom should have told Priscilla about Micheal to begin with!!! That was cruel!! Priscilla did conquer all by accepting her new destiny. Marylin needs her story told too. Janet, truly a story unique in your world.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/29/05
I really liked Priscilla's "never let 'em see you sweat!" (well, glow, in HER case :-) attitude, but I thought Mom was needlessly cruel to withold the truth about Michael from Priscilla, particularly since Michael had been told about her.  Between Mom and Aunt Veronica, though, AV is worse; she is guilty of child abuse with the dog shock collar.  I think, not knowing the truth about Michael and with a mother who would force her into marriage with a man she hardly knew,  Priscilla, once she had taken advantage of all the girl trainning, should have emptied all money accounts she could and taken off.



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