Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Prison Girl
by Houser

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Huji on 10/18/12
Please make a sequel of what happens to him/her after getting out of jail.  

Anyone know any similar stories?


Comment by DominiqueTV on 02/08/12
Great story, thank you very much !

Comment by boatman on 02/20/09
At last someone else with similar fantasies, thank you.

Comment by diane on 10/02/03
I am a submissive slut who loves to be controlled. Now I have fantasies about bing controlled by a group of men. I hope you have a sequal and soon.

Comment by leah on 10/01/03
Dear Fellow Nonconformists!

This was a tough story to read. In fact, I wanted to put it away and try to wash it from my mind -- so depraved is it (mind or story, your choice). The fact that I continued on to the very bitter end can be attributed to one of two motivations: 1) I was excited by the utter degradation of a fellow human being or 2) I felt obligated to at least read to the end if poor John/July had to experience three years of the horror and then to have no end in sight. This story made me think of reading accounts of the gruesome tortures that took place in Saddam Hussein’s dark underground chambers.

There is one thing Houser, the author and a character in the story, should do to prove his mettle and to satisfy his customers who like this sort of beastiality: Write this in the first person. Make yourself into John, then July, and report on experiences, feelings, etc. I’m not sure anyone is up to that.--- This doesn't have the same literay pretenses as The Story of O, but I still feel just as debased as I did when I finished that so-called classic.

And, lest one forget, think that July will have to be very careful with that beautiful wedding gown, for after three years her anal sphincter won’t be able to close firmly; it will probably require an enormous butt plug to do the job. She may well have to eat babyfood while lying on her back, because the muscles of her oral cavity and throat will have been stretched beyond all usefulness. Ditto for drinking liquids. Her vocal cords may well be a thing of the past, which is maybe okay because she wasn't allowed to voice any ideas of value.

To each her/his own.                  leah

Comment by pussy lovelace on 10/01/03
Fantastic story. Loved it to bits. If there's a follow-up, I think you'd be able to improve it with a little more exploration of how July copes with the psychological side of things. Hopefully, sooner or later, she's going to have to start to accept the situation and seek out what little pleasure she can find in her new life.
Please, please submit a sequel.

Comment by Jen on 09/28/03
I absolutely love stories of this genre .. thank you!!!

Comment by aka michelle on 09/28/03
Sir,
I can't tell you how many times I've fantatizied this scenario.  You constructed a story almost exactly as I have in my mind.  

I hope you have more like this.  I absolutely loved it.  

Comment by calamariee on 09/28/03
I liked it, and wonder if you might you have other stories for us to read.

- C.



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal