An absolutely splendid writing. Easily believable and well orchestrated work. Surely all of us want right acting people who don't override the sensibilities of others to bring grief in the world. Offenders look out; Ally is watching (as is God!) Bravo, Julie O, bravo!

I'm very impressed.  Quite an accomplishment considering how badly jaded I am

Please keep it up

D

Dear Julie:

   Fantastic! I should have been reading your stories all along. What was I thinking? This is short but is a complete intro to hopefully many, many other Ally Burns tales. I thought the observation that TG girls were especially vulnerable to predators was poignant. I love the fact that predators were being put away. My feelings about what they do run very deep and I would be glad to see them off all the streets.

  Your writing skills just keep getting better and better. And not just mechanics, though there is a very sizable improvement in proofreading and mechanics. I suppose you already know you are an excellent author but I am glad to have the chance to tell you so. As Ally might say "your stories are tight."  

  Thank you so much I love this story. It is refreshing to have a story with real substantive content, not a plot that is merely a vehicle for crossdressing. Thank you so much, this story is very highly recommended by me. You go girl!

Hugs,

Kristi

Well done story Julie. All the ingredients are there, in the right measure, and it flows along to a satisfying end....open to further developments too, of course :)) I dislike police (i'm sort of 'out of sync' i think) and find it difficult to sympathise with their success, especially as most 'lawbreakers' had their morals etc taught to them by same world who police 'protect' but.....this just gives your story added panache in its overcoming my prejiduce!
hi 5!
solon

i loved this story and look forward to reading the sequel.  I can see a lot of places this could go and hope you continue with this series.  there need to be more TG mysteries out there for us mystery fans.

This is a really good, well written TG police procedureal. The idea of hunting sexual predators over the internet, and Al's operations room setup, were well done and throughly credible. I liked the way that Al's TG-ness integrated into the story too.

Compact and highly enjoyable.  Lots of fun.  I enjoyed it -- a lot.

Keep up the great work, Sister Julie.

Love, Sheryl S.

Great Story - just not long enough. A new angle on the wide range of TG stories. Keep them coming.

Callie