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The Protector-Hunted
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Comment by Susan on 04/22/04
Hello Julie, Comment by Blaine Ellis on 03/24/04 Great story, wonderful characters, tight Plot. NNo glaring Plot holes, it is very wwell done. You are quickly becoming one of my favourite TG authors. Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/20/04 Wow another hit. I just love how you bring all your storys together just totally fab More oh more please This story has love it has action and its show transgender people as strong not weak .Just please do more storys they are great. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/19/04 Ok, I admit it; I got all misty at the end. I put my favorite drift around the dance floor song, "Earth Angel" on the stereo and grabbed my unsuspecting spouse and danced with her and kissed her and told her I loved her .. a number of times. Can't ask much more than that effect from a story. Major congrats, Julie. PS - I think Ally and Carol should go to Texas and marry legally while Ally is still technically male - dressed as as two brides; Shake up those damn reactionaries! I also hope Joe liked Dressing up at least a little. Comment by Tigger on 03/19/04 Great story. Julie has a real talent for good dialog that tells the story, but doesn't overwhelm the action. Comment by Novercia on 03/19/04 Another great read, I can not recommend this story enough. |
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