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The Protector of Angels – Washington DC Team- Slothrop's I Can See For Miles
by Julie O

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Comment by rone welles on 02/23/07

 exelant story we need more law enforcement stories and and a protector in this world .. a protector just to elimnate the bad guys
would be greate ....  thank you  xoxoxooxox  rone :)

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 08/24/04
This is a very good addition/extension to the tales of both authors.  Julie managed to make her heroine fit beautifully into Ty's universe, no easy task, I'm sure.  Very nicely done, Julie.  I enjoyed it and I look forward to more of your tales AND more collaborations with Ty.  As in so many cases, the total is equal to more than the sum of it's parts(or something like that!  LOL!)  Huggles from a Blonde Cathy_t_(Queen of the mixed((or muddled)) metaphors)

Comment by Misty Dawn on 08/21/04

 YooHoo!  I read you!

 It's another great piece, Julie

  Please, help break down the tediums! Keep them coming.

  Misty

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/21/04
Great loved it

Comment by slothrop on 08/20/04
Glad to see this here! Thanks again, JulieO for this fine story.



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