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The Protector: Race Against Time
by Julie O

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Comment by Joanne on 08/10/10
I just finished this, and I'm wondering why you haven't written more. The story of Ally and her antagonist, Margo, has been well considered and enjoyable.
I see that you have not contributed to this sight in five years. Do you intend to finish the Protector series?

Comment by Leslie on 01/15/07
wow that story was REALLY REALLY boring it really sucked, as a twisted thought, i was planning on ally being druged and taken away in the end and LOL becomeing a shemale prostitute but eh your taste in stories suck

Comment by Karen Page on 09/10/04
Hi,

I was just rereading this and noticed a little statement way down in chapter 46.  Celeste / Beth are going to be neighbours with Matt / Cat from The Scholarship.  The different stories just get more intertwined.

Thanks for the effort you put into these treasures.


Hugs


Karen

Comment by Diane Castle on 09/02/04
Julie, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your latest story.  I wasn't expecting one so soon after your Ally-Angel crossover with Tyrone Slothrop (which was also great), so this was a lovely surprise.  My only question is.. how is it that I'm the first person to comment?  :-)

Diane



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