I think this a very bad and sad story, and I didn't like it!
Silvia.

First let me say that it's obvious that the author put a lot of work into writing this story and it is well written aside from the grammar and spelling.  My guess would be that English is a second language for the author.  Was PruesTAIL deliberate instead of TALE?  I thought perhaps there was some signifigance to spelling it that way, but if so, I didn't get it.  for awhile, I thought some of the men might be turned into ponygirl whores, but that didn't happen.

What the story really boils down to is Asians getting revenge for colonialism by tricking western men (or any men that oppose them) and turning them into whores.  This was bluntly admitted at the end.  Also, Pete was pretty bluntly told  "We'll love and support you as long as you do what we want you to, but if you don't we'll see that you're turned into a freak and go insane."  I'm surprised that Pete didn't seem to realize that all the nicey-nice "We love you, Prue." stuff was just brainwashing until he was told.  And even then, he didn't get mad, he thanked the girls for making it easier for him to be accepting and cooperative.

   That leads to what I found really unbelievable:  All the men victims  mentioned caved in and became part of the process.  I would think that with an operation as large as this one, there would have been a resistance movement within.  All the men seem sunk in despair for awhile and then say meekly, "Well I can't do anything about it so I might as well go along with it"  and then wholeheartedly cooperate to screw, literally and figuratively, others of their fellow men.  Where's the anger?  where's the "I'll find some way to get these bitches!"  If all European men in 1940 were like Pete & Co., the population of Europe today would probably all be going "zig heil!"  

I really didn't find any conflict in this OK story, and I think it could have been made really good by the introduction of some.