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A Psycological Thriller
by Danielle L. Richards

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Comment by this is me on 09/05/12
I can't say I agree with the triffling of another persons story; but, I remember that story and how much it infuriated me. Quite often I run into a story where the author (a man supposing themselves to be feminine) portrays not just one woman but every woman in the story as mean, vindictive, anti-masculine and cruel. It makes no sense to me that if gentieel is a good mix with masculine physique why feminize the gentle? None of this makes sense to me.

Comment by cheryl lynn on 01/04/07
just love all your stories please continue writing them. do you post to fictionmania?  heck, duh, i need to check the author's quick list. posting is quicker there.

Comment by Diana on 01/04/07
Finally, a writer after my own heart!  Danielle, you have put into words that which I have wanted to see for so long.  Someone else was pilloried for her rewrite of a negative story and I did not defend her. I know it was wrong of me now, but I lacked the courage then.  Please continue writing, you have a certain talent and flair for it.  Be safe and take care,
Diana



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