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Punished at Primary School
by Jennifer

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Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 12/27/17
I have always loved this story - I re-read for the umpteenth time. The punishment was rather harsh, but it came after Tommy had been impossible boy for a long time (the ice cream incident was just the straw that broke the camels back). As the story strongly hints his father wasn't a very good character and thus it quite possible that he started to enjoy being accepted by his family and girls at school as a girl (at least I think so) - and then found out that she should have been a girl all along. I think this process of accepting girlhood might have been more detailed, but it still rocks me every time I read it.

Ps. TheWallis - why such nasty remarks? Don't read if you don't like.


Comment by thewallis on 11/19/16
My mother and sister tried this on me? They never smiled or tried again when the acid destroyed their looks.

Comment by thewallis on 11/18/16
I now see why tommy did not object to his treatment he was a shirt lifter.

Comment by the wallis on 11/15/16
You forgot to add how Tommy set fire to the school with all his tormenters locked inside along with his mother and sister.

Comment by thisisme on 06/29/13
Mid-story comment... This is the stupidest form of punishment anyone has ever cooked up! Again you have supposed educators who for want of teaching one kid a lesson (and what lesson are they teaching him), instruct/teach an entire school to disrespect someone. What's more to GANG UP ON SOMEONE! I CANNOT stress this enough how that those people in authority may be able to regulate their own level of abuse (though I doubt that is true) they do NOT have an off switch for other people! Those people may learn to fear  but those people of authority will not be around him always to attenuate the others disrespectful actions against him. They make him a target. Also they teach him he has no recourse. He is thrown to the wolves with no hope of intervention. These are NOT the lessons that people should be taught in school! The worst lesson he is learning is not to trust those of authority nor his family. It is very likely in a real life application along the lines of this story the kid would be taught to hate women. It seems in these stories there is always a woman (and usually more than one) who cannot regulate their application of power. Petticoat punishment is STUPID!

Comment by juliej on 05/05/08
brilliant but there seems to be a common traight but that does not make the story any less brillant

Comment by Ingrid Jacobssen on 05/19/07
Thoroughly enjoyed several of your stories that I have read in the last couple of days and looking forward to reading the others. I did a search on mackintoshes and found you. Ingrid is my nom de plume under which I have several stories on the net, all are about wrapping a male (me)helpless in rubber mackintoshes, quite a bit based on reality and experiences as a small boy growing up. The effects have lasted into adulthood and now I am in my 70's and still strongly affected by ladies rubber mackintoshes, one of which I am wearing now as I write this and read your wonderful stories.
I was born in Canada but was taken to England (Beckenham, Kent) by English father and Scottish Mother in 1939 where most of my experiences of being rubbered occurred including being raped by my boyfriends mother while buttoned and belted into two of her macs. Legally a criminal act but I Bless her for it. Love of macs and their effect on me has helped me through some tough times in life. I returned to Canada by myself which is a virtual desert for rubber mackintoshes unfortunately though I have managed to get quite a collection.
Excellent stories and please keep up the good work. Its almost like revisiting my childhood and many places I know well.
I have to wonder if you are a girl or boy and would love to hear from you if you have time. We seem to have such closely parallel lines of thought. Please answer.
Ingrid (John)

Comment by Beardy on 06/16/06
Good story...
My main issue is that the scale of the penalty seems way disproportionate. A term is for-ever when you are 10!
A punishment of say 1 (school) day per offence would give the story just as much punch, at 8 days, possibly pushed up to 10 days with an adequate excuse (not just whim - teachers aren't supposed to do whim), with the opportunity for 2 weekends of "extra-curricular" activity in the plot.
Alternatively, doubling the penalty for each new offence would have given us a series of opportunities to enjoy the embarrassment for ever-longer periods as Tommy keeps slipping up in the early days.

Comment by Love-It on 01/10/06
How many times I sat here reading this story and thinking to myself 'Lucky Tommy'. All that attention from such pretty girls, and witht he endorsement and support of the adults around them. As someone who started to cross-dress in my teens, I envy him being able to wear their uniforms and dresses with the bleesing of the family and school, instead of my own life of having to hide it away from my own parents for fear of a beating because they do not understand.

I have no feelings of being trapped in the wrong body as Tommy does, but there was always a great sense of freedom and release from the pressure I felt at school whenever I borrowed (always returned) a girl's blouse and skirt from the locker room, or a gym leotard from the changing room, to wear for a while before school began in a morning.

So thank you for this heart-warming tale, it brought back happy memories of my own pleasant experiences. :)

Comment by Rone on 12/01/05
 Very enjoyable story...well written and shows talent reeking out of your fingrrs to the keys.....thank you  thank you  Rone

Comment by julie j on 07/25/05
further info on this story finally finished reading it i feel that it was a great story which was well written and descrided tommy found his real self inthe end

Comment by juliej on 07/24/05
a great begining to a good story i will be interested to she how it turns out tomorrrow its a pity the same type of punishment is not used more often if used at all today this would be a great lesson to the boys of today most of whom cause a lot of trouble out of boredem

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 05/17/04
Dear Jennifer:

   This story was definitely edgy for me, especially the scene in the playpen and the blackmail. I was ready for the change and had to read ahead to see if everything came right in the end. You succeeded eminently in catching my attention though.  I just had to find out what was going to happen to Tommy/Jennifer.

   I think your story is well written, in part because it was off topic for me and you didn't lose me. I really liked the last part when things all worked out for the best. Good job.

Hugs,

Kristi

Comment by Boots on 04/25/03
‚h love reading stories of
the boy who was forced to wear
girls raincoat and shiny rubber boots(red,pink,yellow,white,or other bright color )!

‚henjoyed  this new "Jennifer's story
(A boy forced to wear girls raincoat and red rubber boots)
very much!

Comment by Jenna on 03/26/03
WEll I thought the story went well, a bit much on the teasing but I think it woould really be that bad. Maybe worse. The transition was a bit quick, I suposse it could go thaqt way. I think that even for this type of punishment it was way over board. Can you imagine that any normal young man would at best be a socail out cast for life. Or at least until he bacame an adult and moved away. Personally I would support the case for child abuse. My likely dear old mommy and sis would wake up to all the girlie cloths shreeded and find dear old bor with his wirsts slit. I guess I would suggest the threat of being foun out would be just as effective if not more as far as control goes. But that's just my preference. I did have to make sure the story had a happy ending, otherwise I would have skipped it.

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 03/17/03
jennifer this was a good story. I skipped about half of it because it was all teasing and repititious. However, I started reding again with the coming out chapter to the end. Please keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/16/03
Loved the story great keep up the good work.Very good very sweet my dear.Wish it was me

Comment by Womenshoelover on 03/13/03
Another terrific story! Your writing is the best!

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 03/12/03
This is a good story, much more believable in what was done to Tommy than what was done to Jimmy in  "Jimmy Meets His Match".  Also, although it's strange to say, Tommy was a man about his punishment, realizing he deserved it and following his mom's advice to take it, not a continual crybaby like Jimmy.   I did think the conversion from hating dressing like a girl to loving being a girl was rather abrupt, but sometimes things do happen that way.

Just a minor point,  Anne told the story of what she had tricked her brother into when they were teenagers and what they had then done to him.  I wish you had added something about what kind of relationship the two had in the present; my guess would be that it wasn't a close one.



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