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Purely a Business Arrangement - Anna
by Lorna Elizabeth Black

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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 09/03/09
Hi Lorna.
You did a good job.
This is a real love story. I loved!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Lia Monde on 02/01/05
Good pacing and a nice touch with the evolving relationship between Anna and Janet.  Keep up the good work.

Comment by Andy or Andi on 01/31/05
Great Story.  I saw myself in it.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/29/05
Good story

Comment by julie j on 01/12/05
i think that this was a great story well written &explained i was really enjoying untill the now i have to be patient for the nexrt part great story please write soon the next part

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 01/04/05
Lovely story line that only serves to make me jealous and eager for more! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Rose on 01/01/05
Great 2nd and 3rd part. Anna's life is certainly gtting better.
Can't wait for the next part.

Comment by Pete on 12/09/04
Nice thought sweetie.
The poor guy had to go along with the landlord, and finds his life is changed. It is a very horny theme and well developed.  Look forward to the next episode.
you write well

Comment by Rose on 11/27/04
Great first part.Bring on the next.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/24/04
The stated probable size difference between her feet and his and the fact that the shoes were a perfect fit for him indicate she had been planning this for awhile with him in mind.  What would she have done if he had not been interested in and caught with the panties?  Was there a backup plan?  



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