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Puzzled
by Jennifer White

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Comment by TinaCortina on 08/27/03
Brilliant!  This is the 2nd of your stories that I have read, so I am working backwards;  I don't usually read the mind altering/magical/scifi type of story but I will make an exception to read some more of yours; high quality writing, nice ideas, good length;  Thanks

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Comment by Fran on 08/24/03
Yes Jennifer, I enjoyed your story very much. Hugs, Fran

Comment by Sheryl S. on 08/24/03
Extremely clever and witty and perfectly internally consistent.  I re-read it three times, and was amazed at the discipline and artistry in your word selection.  As with getting that perfect "casual" look, you evidently spent a lot of time, effort, and passion making a "short" story seem effortless!  This is a keeper that I've printed out for my "Favorite Story" folder.  And, it's one of only twelve TG-stories among the 80 or so I have there. All of this is my long-winded way of telling you how much I loved your story, Jennifer.  I can hardly wait for your next piece.

Hugs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by cassandra on 08/23/03
Jennifer:

This is simply by way of postscript. I do crossword puzzles and have for thelongest time. I am nowhere as good as Bert, but I am capable. The fun part of your story was working out the crossword puzzle. I do not know about others, but I was actively solving the puzzle as I read your lovely story.

I hate doing postscripts, but this really was fun.

Hugs!!

Comment by cassandra on 08/23/03
Jennifer,

This is a really sweet story, neatly and cleanly written. I loved the character development as well as the plot. I can hardly wait for your next offering.

Hugs!

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/23/03
Cute story Jennifer.  Liked the fact that there was no humiliation and control here.  Here there was love even if no appreciation for the masculine. Crisp clean writing as usual, as well as fun and concisely conveyed characters. Was a big mistake but who would ever thought that would happen from a puzzle?  Maybe you could write a longer tale sometime? Thanks for sharing and skipping the humiliation and control. A quick fun read.  Hugs, Kristi  



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