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The Queen of Country Music
by Slothrop

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Comment by anonymousOne on 03/01/04
Dear Slothrop,

I read your story and liked its quirkiness. By that I mean, it was the tale told to an outsider by an insider, which provided a certain strangeness that would not have been present if you had chosen to tell the story as to another insider. It was well crafted the way that you revealed the "insider" culture bit-by-bit. And gosh, the setting, plot, and characters were all just plain quirky, too.

Thanks!! It was a hoot!

Comment by Mina on 02/29/04
Good idea for a story but the details drag it down in places.  Too much microscopic detail about the changeover--twists and turns are too much and don't add a lot to the overall story.  You're going to lose readers in those places.  I found my eyes glazing over.



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