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Queen of Harvest Moon
by Angel O'Hare

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Comment by Smita Lanjekar on 07/14/11
Very far fetched and unrealistic.Is it 'forced storying'?

Comment by Silvia  (from Brazil) on 06/26/10
Another bad and disgusting story of you!
Silvia.

Comment by Sayge on 05/30/10
This is a very intense and detailed story. One of the best I have read in a while.
It has been Seven yrs since you wrote the first three parts.

WHERE IS THE REST??? :-)  

Please continue writing    I love your work

Sayge


Comment by Robb on 04/14/10
without a doubt this is one of the most indepth and compelling stories of the transgendered life I ever read& I have read many over the years. Angel you are truly a beautiful marvel that God put on this earth.... Please dont stop writing

Comment by skimonkey on 02/10/10
Um I do love your stories sepecially angel but how can a ct town be only 100 yrs old when pretty much every town in ct is almost three hundred years old and the youngest top out at the low 200s sorry to be a pest but I know a good bit about the are since I went to college in westfield ma as a american histpry major

Comment by Mona on 12/13/09
I truly hope that you finish the story, I would love to know how it ends I fell for Ricky and his famliy, but hope that Ricky will become happy as a girl

Comment by stephen on 03/14/09
it was a bit slow at start and then it got going. when it got to a gripping part and that was it. i hope there more? if not. it would be a waste of a great story.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 11/18/07
Angel, I see where you reposted Chapter 1 on Big Closet. Me, I feel for Ricky and his family. I hope that the town truly regrets what they are doing to him just for the parade. Angel, if you need a certain 400 pound hairy friend to help, just call on me. as one Scrappy Doo loves to say" LET ME AT 'EM I'LL SPLAT 'EM!!!"

Comment by Vivien Tena on 05/19/07
Yeah,LOL! What Francine said.

Comment by Francine on 01/15/05
Hi Angel  :)

Now that I have found and read this story (up to this point).

ANGEL....PLEASE, PLEASE continue this story.

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Karen Page on 11/22/04
Just read up to part 4.  This is a very well written and has me intrigued on several points.

1.  Did "The Corporation" cause Ricky's original problem or is it just a fluke of nature

2.  The actual aim of the research.  


I really feel for Julia, Bill but mostly for Ricky.  Forced feminization is something that I normally shy away from reading but this one has me gripped.  

Also the type of furniture implies they are also planning on treating Ricky as a girl much younger in age.  Is Dr Roma's injection to make Ricky incontinent just the start of worse treatment in the future?

So many questions unanswered.  I look forward with trepidation to further chapters


Hugs

Karen


Comment by TheBeachedWhale on 11/27/03
Love the story, just wish you would write a few more
parts.


Comment by Linda Blair on 01/19/03
I have just finished all four chapters posted at this time. I'm hooked, can't wait for more. I do hope you have a happy ending in mind for little Richy though. As well as some revenge along the way.
Linda

Comment by GirlhoodDreamer on 01/17/03
 I have read part one and two. So far I love the story. I think that its one of the best TG stories I've seen in awhile.

Comment by Kathleen Phillips on 01/16/03
 Dear Miss O’hair.
If you want to get interesting, have a couples of bulles, try jump her for being a TV., in front of 1 or 2 American Indians., Navaho, or apache, preferable.
To them, TVs are holy,
If you even insult one on the reservation, you will be doing good to get off it alive.
.
Kate



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