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Queen of the Diamond
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Comment by Silvia. on 02/12/09
I simply loved this story. Comment by harry on 06/24/08 i just loved this story the way it is i head no truble in reading it at all Comment by Tamara Rand on 12/09/02 This was an imaginative and potentially interesting story. It had a lot of nice elements. But I'm afraid I have to compare it to a beautifully designed house which the architect, devoid of any knowledge of carpentry, decides to build himself. Despite the nice design, the execution is so bad, no one can live in it: The floor slants, the doors are uneven, the windows won't close and the roof leaks. All of these are strictly mechanical faults, but mechanics are what we depend on to make things hold together. Comment by Pervette on 12/05/02 I'm only about a third of the way through, so I may change my mind, Comment by Doyanne on 12/04/02 Good, well written, but too much along the Janet Stickney theme which is overused. |
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