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Queens Village
by Tanya Mazurek

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Comment by Sheryl S. on 04/02/04
Marvelous, beautifully evocative of the village in the early '70's (when I was there, close enough).  The awkwardness and winsomeness combine so well and warmly.  Your technique has much more presence in this one with excellent rhythms and well-balanced visuals.  I read it twice, and just printed it so I can read it again later.  In other words, I not only loved it, but relate to it on a deeply personal level.

Thank you so much!

Love and Hugggs,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Job the foranger on 04/01/04
Thank you.  I like.  "Boro of Queens" Too.
Wery Good, Plese give us more.  
             Job.

Comment by chrisl on 04/01/04
Hi Tanya,
        I love a fresh story with a different plot, new locations and especially new personalities.
This story has these things. I was fascinated to read along with your story telling and discover what would happen next.
The sexuality is not really my cuppa, still the tenderness and caring nature of your love scene really worked. It is almost a lesbian encounter :)  
Thank You and Pretty please may I have some more.
Hugs
Chris    



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