This reminds me of a time were i went to a party. And passed out waking up in the bathroom wearing a thong that was exremeley tight,a garter belt and garters holding up fishnet stockings,black gogo boots that were really high heeled,fake breasts being held up by a sexy underwired pink push up bra,a tight mini skirt and a long sleeved belly shirt,and hooker make up,with a wig that was blonde. i try to take it off but its all stuck. I walk outta the bathroom where ten people are waiting fer me. they laugh ,lay me down,and fucked me in the ass.
true story p.s. ima dude

The brutality is what made this so real.  I loved it and re-read often.  The persuasion dialogue combined with his resulting situation made this particularly hot.

i wonder if she truelly loved her husband. non shows, expecelly after the gang rape he discribes and her reaction is "perfect! how did it feel."

one thing about the end. she felt so threatened by his adultery. she is doing the same thing to him.
he should tell her that if he cant flirt with women anymore. if he can only flirt and sleep with members of the same sex, its only fair that rule applies to her to. she must flirt and sleep with women. i would love to see how her reaction to *that* would be.

   I had mixed feelings about this one. The setup is intriguing, and one I'm not sure I've seen in StorySite before. Also, the step-by-step "training" approach to having him gradually become more stereotyped gay in appearance and mannerism  was good (as Vickie points out, there's all kinds of gays, but for this to work, he had to go for the swishy-faggot look). Problem is, it began to fall apart around the end of part III. I didn't see the point of having him suddenly "come out" at work just the day before the party. It would have been more interesting if his "gayness" had developed slowly over time. Also, the bit about his being gang-raped by the three salesmen didn't ring true at all, especially with the almost offhand way it was handled. What if SHE had been gang-raped by three guys? The party itself didn't make much sense either.
    How about a story in which (by some form of coercion) the guy is "trained" over a suitably lengthy period of time to slowly turn into a stereotyped fag- everywhere- home, office, in public. It seeems to me that would be a better payback for his adulterous affairs. Also, it could be an exploration of his own "true" sexuality, and to expose him to the way the world treats "open" gays. Instead, we just got one more tired, wornout variation on the wife-puts-hubby-in-panties-and-he-immediately-starts-giving-blowjobs theme.

i dearly hope that his wife gets with the wrong man and he somehow forces her into painfull bondage porn films. what ever he did to her, didnt involve rape and wasnt done directly to her.
but what she did to him, was so bad.
ralph is a sadistic rapist that needs to be punished. so is mike.
i like your stories but at the same time, you create such evil characters that even the ones that deserve some vengeance, seek it in such a way they loose all my sympathy. i hate rape and slavery and vengeance shouldn’t involve that.