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The Question
by Brandi Simpson

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Comment by link building on 10/23/13
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Comment by Jenny leeann smith on 07/11/09
Write more to this storie please it needs to have more to it and its grate so far

Comment by Mandee on 01/07/06
Thank you Brandi for a very convincing story about a young TS.  Certainly all in our community can identify with the strong opposite sex identifications which you present so authentically.  Most of the reactions except for that of the baby sitter, seem authentic.  I don't think most baby sitters would be as kind or mature about it, and certainly wouldn't ever put themselves in jeopardy by dressing up a male boy in their care in femme clothing.  But in fantasy- it was nice to see and live - even vicaiously.
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by slimv on 09/28/04
Great job!  I loved the way you presented the character's emotions and  hope you will continue it.

Comment by Misty Dawn on 09/27/04

    This is potentially a very delightful story line.  Fleshed out to its full potential it could develope into a full-blown universe.  

    Misty

Comment by SaraUK on 09/26/04
Thanks for a nice little story Brandi, and I hope you add some more to it soon.
Hugs
SaraUK



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