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Comment by cheap oem software on 02/11/12
YNvfxR Informative, but not convincing. Something is missing but what I can not understand. But I will say frankly: bright and benevolent thoughts!.... Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09 Wonderful rules of employ. However, an expansion of the story would be delightful describing how the company is very efficiently and successfully run by a group of all-Female Board of Directors intentent on taking over the business world,and also the rules of conduct and dress are enforced by a highly capable Female Security. Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/06/09 As noted by my maid priscilla ann, these are wonderfully simple rules for the submissive sissy to follow; but rules must be obeyed at all times. If not, there should be severe consequences. Perhaps Ms. Travis will one day share the punishments administered to those unfortunate "girls" who break even one rule. Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/25/08 I simply love those rules. However, no mention of punishment should any be disobeyed. I get punished whenever I disobey even in the slightest way any of the rules Mistress has set for me. Nonethes, these are rules any "self respecting" submissive would adore living by. Comment by dan on 02/22/07 I love your quick rules! Very erotic! Comment by Juliette Lima on 07/21/05 Nice images in words, but limited. Sort of needs a frame story and some poor man to suffer under the rules. |
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