PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I CANNOT WAIT TO READ IT ALL. I SURE HOPE HE BECOMES A SHE WITH A TINY CLITTY AND 2 TINY USELESS SHRIVELED UP LITTLE OVARIES PUSHED UP INSIDE OF HIM!!! I HOPE SHE IS KEPT FULL OF CUM SO SHE CAN GET PREGNANT!!!!!!!!
sissy missy

Finish this story!!

yes, its a shame it involves a child, not comfortable with that, but otherwise its a great start and i cant wait for the next chapter !! hurry up !!

OMG. i'v been having a dream er fantasy of almost the same thing (the pills and then the drink but it makes me black out. n i wake up on a Dr table with my legs in the sterrups and the gag part to  but then a giant hmm hmm is relentlessly pushed n me i wanna write a short about it but scared it might happen to me 4real) lol GREAT start but y did u stop PLS continue

Wonderful beginning. My, what did poor Scott get himself into?

great start to this story more please

i agree he should be older but its a good start for a story next part please

I too would have preferred for Alex/Scott to be a little older. He could have been, say 16, and still not have had a growth spurt or that much hair.  Although their parents may prefer to think otherwise, many 16 year olds are sexually active.  Also, it seems to be incongrous to say that he hadn't entered puberty and yet write about his getting an erection and having the girls squeeze his balls.

Nevertheless, having read Part 1, I think this story shows a lot of promise and look forward to reading future episodes.

Keep up the good work.

SS

     If I want pedophilia (which I don't), I'll visit a kidporn site.

Hmmm... I think I'll give this one a miss. I'm not comfortable with this sort of treatment of a child.