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Ransom
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Comment by Phoenix764 on 09/07/05
This is definitely one of the worst stories ever told. All Amy had to do was give him love, and he would have stayed with her. He would have abandoned his father without a doubt. Why didn't she offer him the chance? What his mother did is unconciousable. She intentionally destroyed her son, and any chance her son having children for revenge against the father. If it happened in real life, I would hope that she got a life long prison sentence, since giving her a hystorectomy without anesthia or drawing and quartering are not options. Comment by Trebor 54 on 01/30/04 This story was one of the worst I've read on this site. I hope the father comes arround and gets even his whore of an ex wife!!!! Using the son as a means for revenge is totally stupid and wifey should be punished because of it. Comment by tanyalynn on 01/30/04 I did love the story, even if the psychology was a little flawed. for those of us who wish we were girls, this would be an ideal situation. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 01/30/04 This time I must disagree with Jezzi. :( Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/29/04 I usually dislike mind control stories, and Amy and Lynn certainly messed with Anthony's mind and did it for revenge. However it was also clear that they loved the new Anthony and lavished Jessica with love and affection. It didn't seem like just an act. If he had been getting love and affection from his dad, he wouldn't have fallen for their "he hates you" story. So, all in all, I see this as a happy and just ending. |
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