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Rasha
by Jean M. Chambers

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Comment by Meera H on 02/19/17
excellent story,

Comment by Angie on 02/16/17
I have to say I didn't really like this story.

Comment by juliej on 07/22/07
a wicked story but briliant set up what a way to go more please

Comment by Debilyn on 06/24/06
The story totally aside, I think Indian women look positively elegant and queenly in their sarees.  I wish I could wear one, with appropriate sandals, blouse, very lacy panties, bare midriff, and waist-length black hair in a thick braid.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/18/03
What a betraying selfish bitch Amisha turned out to be!   It's not the feminization; I loved that part.  It's the betrayal of friendship; There is nothing to indicate that this guy was gay or TS or a bad guy, and he is probably going to be either killed, forced into homosexuality, or forced to undergo SRS, all because of a false friend.  

I don't think he would mind actually becoming Rasha, but I hope she can escape, get back to America, and get that bitch and her friend.

Comment by Cross on 11/18/03
This is the best story i ever read...I love it soooo much.
Jean, you wrote a best story.  Thanks.
I have been reading it over and over and really wish you can continue for part two of this story...what happen next.  Please, please continue the story, but please write that the boy will still remember his male part and his male memory, think it will be best.
Jean,
Do write more about this type of story and wish to hear from you soon.
Again, please CONTINUE THIS STORY....I WISH AND LOVE TO READ FURTHER.
That's my wish.
p/s. For so many stories I read, this is the first time I give comment.  Because I really LOVE this story. Again, please continue the story.

Thanks.

Comment by Mysti on 11/17/03
     I have the same problem with this story as I did with Jean's earler story, "Saree Bound." It is just too far-fetched to believe that an American male can simply disappear into Indian society with no means of escape. Two  words: "American consulate". I'm still waiting for the story of an American male who voluntarily wants to experience life as an Indian woman. That story would be a far richer exploration of cross-cultural  and cross- gender differences.

Comment by Pervette on 11/17/03
Very well done, & an interesting cross-cultural exploration.  But
I can't help wondering...what's to keep him from seeking out an
American embassy & telling them his story? He might get in some
legal trouble, but he could probably show coercion. And if he was
ever fingerprinted, there would be no question of his identity.
.
--Pervy

Comment by Paula on 11/17/03
really like the story. It was interestingly different type tale and hope you write similiar good stories in the future.

Comment by anonymousOne on 11/16/03
Jean,

I read and enjoyed your story. Thank you for writing it. Based on reading this excellent story, I downloaded several stories that you previously posted, and plan on reading them sometime over the next few months.

For me, this story really stands out, and I tried to put my finger on why. I think it is the metaphor of the naive american being exploited by the more worldly "other". Like some people think the movie "Star Wars" stood for the confrontation between the free world and the evil empire, I think your story connects with something currently in the culture about the confrontation between the naive west and the more worldy middle east and asia.  I don't know if this is accidental or intentional on your part, but the way you made the "other" a woman who is already lurking among americans and then emasculates the naive american is really powerful. I think it makes a strong connection to the post 9/11 fear that is presently all too pervasive. Although the theme is not unique to you (see "Anything for Love" by Factory boy at www.bdsmlibrary.com) you have done it particularily well.

Thank you again for a wonderful story.


Comment by B on 11/16/03
I really loved this story.  I am so glad you have posted another story.  I always enjoy your stories.  I love to hear more of this story or any others you share.  I really hope you continue writing and posting more soon.  Thank you!



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