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perdon por no responder en ingles, me gusto mucho tu relato y lo disfrute. es  interesante y de buen gusto.

gracias por escribir

jorge

I believe you.
I am a male and like to let it as it is. I come quite often to storysite, because i have read some very interesting, well written stories with some extras(you know what i mean). I come here every now and then on the hunt for similar good (fictional) stories. When i read your story my interest was raised from line to line, because i like to know from other people, how they experience the genderroles that were layd on us from society and how they cope with it. I think it is not wrong to experiment a bit as long nobody has to suffer. Change is the spice of life.
Life gets boring sometimes. You don't have to restrict your experimenting just to genderroles. Be inventive! Drive another way home from work than usual. Try other food than usual. Don't let your live be ruled by others. Learn or invent a new language to talk with your partner in secret. The possibilitys are just limited by your imagination. Some people get more from life than others.  Thank you for that short glimpse in your life.

I only wished you aged the story before posting it. A re-read and run through spell and grammar check would have made it cleaner. Also homophone confusion (plane for plain) and missing subjects for verbs. I don't think using a letter for your wife's name was necessarily bad, but coming from aviation and amateur radio I read the J as Juliet. Just one question What the hell is a JUMPER? Is that a knitted pullover ie. an American sweater?

I enjoyed your story.  Well told.

Hi Lauran

Welcome back;  enjoyed the story, it just how I would want it;  go all out, withdraw back into the shell for another go later;  glad to see you have the writing bug again

Love Tina x