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Real Spell
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Early June on 04/15/06
Another in the horror genre.  Magics is not fo everyone.  I would liken it to flying a plane, while almost everyone could possibly do it, it requires much study, with much practice, and usually a good teacher.  While you might possibly be able to coerce a large plane into off the ground, by luck, leaving a minimum of damage.  It is doubtful you could do the same on landing.   Our novice mage started off wrong, and went further off course till he crashed and burned.
Thanx for the tidbit to keep me awake tonight.:)

Comment by Dayna. on 03/23/06
col·lage  n. An artistic composition of materials and objects pasted over a surface, often with unifying lines and color.
A work, such as a literary piece, composed of both borrowed and original material.

col·lege n. An institution of higher learning that grants the bachelor's degree in liberal arts or science or both.





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