A long time I don't read a story so bad. It isn't a believable story.
He's an intelligent man and he would never let she do this to him.
She's a bitch, and never loved him.
Really, it's a very bad story.
Sorry Brandy.
Silvia.

Beautiful story just wanted to get to be the one trying it out?

Brandy, I've read this story again......and again and again,  in the past.  I've come across it again in the "Stories posted this day" section.... and I love it all over again.  The first 1/2 or 2/3rds especially - dreams!  Lucky boy.. and lucky girl!!!!  Please write some more......... love Ginger xx

you are very good

I LIKED THE STORY VERY MUCH.

I have to say this was a wonderful story! If only it could be this way in the real world. I loved the way it came together yet did not destroy the couple. It built on the love that was there, and made life so much better for both of them.I have read this twice now and will read it many more times. Thank you so much for adding a bright light to my fantasies. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Hello Brandy:

   Superb as usual. Your style allowing for a very wild scene to appear completely believable as usual. I really enjoyed the true love expressed here though I feel Joy was pushed way too fast in the bar scene ( by being abandoned if she didn't go in).  Sometimes there is revenge in us. There is no shame in all this and a real and lasting understanding of what it means to think of the other person seems to have occurred.  A very lovely tale. I think your writing style is fantastic.

Hugs,

Kristi

It's taken some time to get to one of Brandy's stories and I'm not a big fan of magic stories so this story looked to be something I could find very enjoyable.

It actually surpassed my expectations and I'm very glad I took this story to read. The manner in which Jay/Joy came to terms with lets say her new clothes and life seems to have started off a little too fast paced but in all honesty that did in no way make the story that much less enjoyable.

It seems that we do have a talented author here and it's going to make me read at least one more story of Brandy's even, if it happens to be a story that contains magic.

I think that there are a quite a few things within this story that any author can assimilate into their own works. The style or just the way the paragraphs are written. The content and the presentation are some other items that show a very well rounded out author and one that has a vivid imagination and knows the in's and out's of using it.

Diane

All the way through I was anxious to see how this loving couple would keep their marriage intact.  How you going to keep them down on the farm after they've seen Steve's....???  Cooling the relationhip by giving them the milk without forcing them to buy the cow.  Genius!  Writing!

Allowing Joy/Jay to continue on into the future by making him/her part of the job.  Genius II!! Writing!!

Two big thumbs up... thumbs covered by ruby red jewels.  (Part of the story does require you to suspend your sense of reality... but isn't that what we do best?)

The nights in Montana are so cold you sometimes invite a dog to jump in bed to help keep you warm.  Some nights are so cold you have to have as many as three dogs join you.  In honor of Steve Gage's Montana Thunders and one of those three dog nights, please welcome one more Joy to the world.

Julie Connors was a schemer
Was a good wife of mine.
Didn't understand every word she said
So she helped me look so fine
As a woman, I could know her mind

Singin'

Joy to the world
All the boys are girls, now
Joy to your wishes cuz he is she
Joy is you and me

If I were a Queen for a day
Tell you what I'd do
I'd learn to blow the men ...in the den ...with a friend
Then make sweet love to you

Sing it now

Joy to the world
All the boys are girls, now
Joy to your wishes cuz he is she
Joy is you and me

You know they'll love us ladies
Love to have our fun
We're all that we seem and a little bit more
We'll be dead if read before dawn
I said dead if read before dawn

Joy to the world
All the boys are girls, now
Joy to your wishes cuz he is she
Joy is you and me

Joy to the world
All the boys are girls, now
Joy to your wishes cuz he is she
Joy is you and me

Joy to the world
All the boys are girls, now
Joy to your wishes cuz he is she
Joy is you and me

Love your work... Brandy!

This is my favorite TG story of all time...

Wonderful. The edge of humour that threaded it's way throughout this story gave it just the right touch of class. It seemed as though Jay/Joy was talking/writing to a very close friend about his experiences, knowing that they would understand and approve.

Keep writing stunners, hun.