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dy1xt0 Hey, thanks for the article post.Much thanks again. Awesome.

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good story but need some updates

BerqTb Very informative article.Really looking forward to read more. Much obliged.

WhMYAk I truly appreciate this article post.Really thank you! Really Cool.

I loved the first part but the second part was just plain cheesy and predictible.  

3mWUVJ Uh, well, explain me a please, I am not quite in the subject, how can it be?!....

Lovely story. Thank you.

As a 76 year old retired ambulance paramedic I have seen a lot of unhappy young people of both sexes struggling with their sexuality
and resulting changes.I thought your story showed a lot of empathy and feeling and I particularly enjoyed your comments at the end----
may you write many more lovely stories.May God bless you.

Fantastic story and imaginative plot - dual-sexed - I'm smiling ear-to-ear.

Wow great story I really enjoyed it are you going to write any more stories?  I would love to read anything you have. Please email me if you are.  Thanks!

I love mother daughter(son) stories  it was a part of my fem side life too and I associate with it.  I also over the years have entertained the frightening fantasy of castration (forced) and the joy of sex change (freely chosen) so a am empathetic to this story. The truth of hermaphrodites however  is a tad far fetched since these characteristics are notiicable at birth and many parents are askedd to make a choice then...Some good tv documentaries are about this very issue..But the theme was great and the sexual eroticism had its positive effect on me   thank youu   I wonder what part 2 was about?

Now Karin needs to become the National Champ with her sister and find true love

its  a hard way to do it but everything turned out right in the end of course in a legal world this would have been highly illegal the story as i read it it was brilliant you are  very good writer dannielle well done more please it was a hard read but very exciting and on edge

I liked this story really good.. except for most of the end.. when Karin was fixing to leave before getting drugged out, I think that having him go back to life as a male.. seeing as thats how he wanted it to be, would have been better. It seems to me that all the stories I have read, even though I haven't read all, seems to always end with them ending up as a female in the end, which I think is wrong. Another better ending (in my opinion) would have been that instead of forgiving his mother, which I really hated by the way, "she" take her revenge for what they done to him. Throwing that stuff in about him having a vagina all that time was kinda ya know.. un-realistic. But overall I think it was a great story. Keep up the good stories please. :)

Yeah well, there is a fault in every story ever told!  I still liked what I read and wonder when the continuation will occur?  An average reader can nit-pik a story to death, but I find that if I like the basic idea of what I read then it's a good story!  I don't know how many people nit-pik a movie to death but I'll bet it's just about everybody!   Mr. richards, I thought that it was good enough!  After all it's nice once in a while to use ones own imagination! So after all that I say hurry up and lets get part two rolling please?

<<   The feelings of total betrayal by my Mother all but drowned me in sadness and a sharp emotion that I had never known before....It was Hatred! Latching onto the incredible power that was in that emotion I was buoyed up out of the morass of self pity and launched onto the beach of purpose. Now every pain, every loss, every humiliation caused me by my mother was added fuel to my agenda. I would make all who had anything to do with my fate suffer and suffer most grievously.  >>

FINALLY !!!  Someone gets it right.  I keep trying to tell the authors who write about how boys unknowingly changed into girls still love the "loved" ones who do it to them that that just makes the betrayal all the worse.  Love betrayed turns to hate.  CONGRATS !!!  Can't wait for this to continue.

Hmm, revenge lowers the one seeking it. Sister is dead, most likely a drug overdose. Mother turns out to be a bitch, and he should walk out on her, get to the doctor, nurses who did what they did -- acid in face is good, and reveal all to neighbors, people in towns, and a newspaper or TV would pay a lot for his story.

 If you have taken someone elses story and merely added to it then you should have had permission and given the appropriate credit to the original author, unless of course you were the original anonymous poster.
 Personally I hadn't seen the original and overall I like the story very much - but why did you skimp his sisters demise?
Slow yourself down a little - you will be a better writer for doing so.

Excellent follow up!  Glad to see that the formula follow up of the male (pretty much an innocent one here) changed against his will coming to realize how much better off she is as a girl and professing her gratitude to the person who brought it about is NOT followed.  Any reasonable person in this situation would be righteously enraged, if not driven mad by the experience.  Way to follow the different path!

Brandi

Original.I like it.I really do.This mother is really a bitch.

The first part of the story is a personal favorite of mine, ever since it was submitted to TSA some years ago.

http://tsa.transform.to/tg/regrets.html

I'm a little dismayed by the second "new" part of it, which seems to take a big u-turn from the original. It was a slightly goofy story about a kid being swallowed up by greed. This second part seems to be a revenge fantasy that is written in an entirely different style and with a wholly different agenda.

I have no problem with an author doing sequels to established work, but it should have been spelled out with a little more clarity. The first half of this is written by one person, who is unknown, and the second part is written by the listed author. Also, posting another's work without consent is a little troubling. A lot of people object to that.

I loved your story. However, there is at least one logic flaw.
The most pronounced is the damaged skates. Surely his mother could have purchased new skates instead of all the girls clothing.
"we are sunk anyway if you do not win the regional." ...(Or something similar was said.) Perhaps an explanation as to why no new skates were available. (Back ordered, size not available, local shop lost in fire etc.)
Other than that I thought your work was good.
Thanks
Ann

Did he/she sister die or his /her love like that for mum died.For a mother to do that to a son who gave up his boy hood well but I think she the mother is more misguided than evil I hope so I hope hate does not fill Katrin life .For in the end she will end up alone and nothing is worse than that, If her mother does any more to her she will lose all that she has gained .She cant keep her locked up that defeats the point of what she wants. This has the making of a very sad tale.

Excellent story

but when did Sis die?  I must have missed that.  I did see where she started drugs, and where she was no longer healthy

maybe I was too focused on Kevin/Karin

I wonder what the revenge will be

Strange turn of events.  Strange indeed!