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The Rehearsal.
by Belle Gordon

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Comment by Silvia. on 11/13/10
How could a mother do what Olivia did with her own son/daughter?
She is a disgusting pervert, and deserve go to jail for what she did with her son/daughter.
Salvador DiMarco, isn't a man nor a woman. He doesn't deseve to live.
He's a disgusting and pervert monster,and should go to jail too!
Chrissy is only a fourteen years old boy. Or should I say girl?
She/he is a CHILD!
I'm sorry, but this isn't a good story! I didn't like!
Silvia.


Comment by Count Dracula on 04/29/10
Some or these stories are so unreal, I find it totally biased that Olivia DeCoursey says "Ever since the awful experience with her ex-husband (Roger DeCoursey) and his perverted friends (Tom Durham and Mark)......" and yet she and Sal (Salvador DiMarco) commit far worse perverted incest and gross paedophilia on her 14 year old son Chrissie (Christopher DeCoursey) destroying the young boys natural life forever, than anything her husband ever did or would be likely to do on Christopher.

Comment by MaryLou on 06/22/09
Lucky Chrissie... if only...

Comment by Jayne Louise MacGregor on 05/04/09
Lovely story.  Would have liked to see something more between Sally and Olivia maybe, but lovely all the same.  Agree with some of the other comments about Sal and Chrissie, maybe if Chrissie was slightly older (say about 16 and a fifth former?) but all the same, lovely story.  Adore your writing style.  My panties were damped all the way through it! ;-p

Comment by Jennysmith on 03/28/09
That was a lovey storie simpley lovey i cummed and am going to again from that storie

Comment by Pauline Brendon on 08/31/07
What a wonderful tale. I had an erection all the way thru it.
Please do more like this

Comment by Vicki Stewart. on 03/04/07
Hi Belle, I am really impressed with this story, allthough I felt that the intimate sexual part between sally and chrissie was a bit OTT, (considering the age of the boy) albeit fiction, I would have loved to have been in Chrissie's shoes. you are a brilliant author, writting with real feeling and sentiment, please keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next story. Kind regards, Vicki.

Comment by Geena Beth White on 12/19/06
This is a lovely story and I just love the way it developes.  More from Belle Gordon please!

Comment by Tracy on 02/16/06
Really enjoyed reading your story and wondered if you will write more in a similar vein?

Comment by bethany on 05/05/04
Belle, I enjoyed your story. The two relationships (Chrissy and his Mom; Chrissy and Sal) obviously appeal to two very different types of readers.  For my part, even though they are both feminine and en femme, the sexual aspects of the relationship between Sally and Chrissy is a bit of a turn-off.  On the other hand, Chrissie's relationship with his Mom is extremely exciting. Her not-so subtle attempts at feminizing him (I love the description of the striped T with three-quarter length sleeves), including using him as her makeup demonstration model, and his receptiveness, are wonderful.  The added dimension of them going beyond 'what is appropriate' really makes the story special.  It what so many of us have privately wished for (and yet does not appear very often in TG stories).  Perhaps you could develop two separate stories; one for readers like me, and one for readers who enjoy the more explicit elements of two tg's in a relationship.

Comment by Pervette on 05/01/04
I enjoyed this. Kept thinking how I would have liked to experience
something like that myself as a boy.
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--Pervette



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