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The Reincarnation of Jennifer Jane
by Jennifer Jane Pope

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Comment by Steve on 11/13/10
I believe this is the first time I've entered my e-mail in a comment. I hope that you have never been victimized in any manner against your will for it to be the reason that you wrote this story. I like the other two comments find it a bit disturbing but without doubt for different reasons. I've been victimized on numerous occasions in my younger days and can say it never has for me turned into anything other then repugnance even to this day and causes a bit of anger that some may say borders on rage. I think this tale to some extent has been a bit of a catharsis for me. I am glad the person in the tale had people that loved; cared and nurturing to the main character. It sucks when you've never had anyone like that in you're life for real. Some of truly are aware of the stark reality of what it truly means to be an orphan and truly alone and adrift in the world. I feel I never will now as I can see for the last few years that I'm broken and will never be able to trust anyone enough to even let the process of letting anyone close to me. I guess you could say I have an unassailable fortress about myself. I would love for it to be otherwise; but truly believe now at my age that will never be possible. I as a way of closing would like to say that as a result of what has occurred in my life have become very empathetic to others suffering. I'm actually glad for that. As I've felt pain I would never wish that on someone else and as a result of that I want to state I'm always there for others and am willing to help them with no thought of reciprocation. It's enough to show that someone cares even if we don't get any of that back. Gratitude cannot be hidden or faked for those who are emotionally raw regardless of how many years have gone by. No; there are no pills or therapy for a broken souls. But one must always strive to rise above the pain and heartache as well as horrors one has had to go through. That's my one conciliation, and that is to be able to rise above that and still be able to care for others even if I'm dysfunctional in such a manner that I'm unable to show it in a way to enable me to have love in my life. So in closing I wish to say thank you for the tale and am glad the characters are able to find peace and happiness and can only hope that in real life that others are as well able to find that. I hope it is not just a fairy tale for every one to be able to find peace and happiness in ones life and find completeness. I wish you well on all you seek to do and say that one dark and twisted tale has touched the heart of someone who can feel love for your characters.        

Comment by adam on 10/21/04
This story sunk into every part of me, deeper than I thought there were parts of me to sink into.
I had sat down to read some erotic fiction, and had arrived at the end of the story a completely different person, a relaxed person with an inner calm that I have always envied in others.
After my friends talk with me for a few minuets, ask me what has changed, they can tell it is something, but can’t pin it down, I am not sure I can either.
Very good story. It was just the right thing at the right time for me.
I do not know how to express my thanks to the author, but thank you.

Comment by Jonathan on 01/02/01
Well, I had to add a comment after discovering that this story had none.  My review is fairly simple.

Was it a good story?  Oh yes.  Technically brilliant, well written and paced, the mechanics were flawless (or, if flawed, beyond my skill to detect) which limits my ability to be constructive. :-)  If I have one complaint, it's that the reappearance of the villain is very predictable.  Having him crash into the house felt like a B Horror movie scene tacked on and didn't quite fit into an otherwise excellent story.

Did I enjoy the story?  Brrrr... no, not really.  It was very dark and disturbing.  Please don't think that makes the story bad!  I'm merely wanting you to know my particular bias.

Either way, thanks Jenny.  Even if this one was far from my usual preferences, it was still well worth the read.



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