Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Remarkable
by Jennifer White

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Early June on 06/20/05
Remarkable!  You write so very wonderfully.  I just got to this story as it was buried in the Massive update at Story Site 6 weeks ago.  It is so good I wish I had read it earlier.  Sometimes your vignettes are too short.  This is one of those times.  Sarah was obviously as unsuspecting as Mark when the transformation occurred.  Another fun tale.  I hope to read another before day's end.  Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Comment by Jen White #1 Fan on 05/17/05
Oh Jennifer, you got to the most intresting part of this one, and then the story just ended. I wanted more.

Thanks for the avalanche of recent stories!




Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal