Me, again. Well, I just finished reading it. Mostly, it's a porno flick, an adolescent boy's three-way lesbian phantasy. The usual theme of a guy suddenly finding himself to be in the body of a woman and having to adapt to it is part of the story, but it is minimal. I didn't find it to be very erotic either, though it was full of sex -- this story was too much of a playful romp, and far too funny, for it to be a sexual turn-on for me. There was, however, some commentary about the male condition, and a rebuttal to a common stereotype that women hold against men, that I thought worthy of snipping out and adding to my collection of clippings from various stories I have read on the TG archives. And, it would, seem, that, with all of, the sex, going on, the narrator, never, managed, to catch, her breath, which made, the story, much harder, to, read...

Most stories (this one included) are written from the point of view of a narrator, who describes settings, tells us what is happening, and quotes what people are saying. I've just started this story, and the narrator, impresses me, as being, just a bit, short winded... just a little, out of, breath... I, sincerely hope, that he... whew, this is hard... can catch, his second wind... (gasp, gasp...) before, too long...

Great story... just left me wondering if this had truly been a *punishment* (wink).  Maybe the evil sister was not as evil as she was made to be.

Well done!

the story is so long I had to take a break from it but thought I would leave the comment I love it so far waking in the bed and lubercating like a real woman when breasts touched and all.