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Rescued by the Savior
by Dave Hicks

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Comment by Fred on 08/23/18
No one will probably ever read this including the author since it has been 10 years since any updates on the web site other then comments.

I found the story intriguing but it totally lacked any sort of reason WHY. Why was all this done to him and the other people (who I assume were men at one time).


Comment by Dianna on 03/02/08
I enjoyed this one, I just wish there was a bit more to the story.

Comment by Ken H on 09/16/07
A moving story - well done, Dave!

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/10/07
This was excellent and original.  It's too bad David can't appreciate what he has made possible.

Comment by Johnny on 11/27/02
I really liked your story very much indeed!  It is a novel way of letting the reader know just how much this poor male was feminized and dominated. (both are my absolute favorite subjects!!!!) Please, if you could .....elaborate on what you have started.  This could be the beginning of a very popular writing.  The potential for expanding on this story base is very large.

Thank you for giving me a very entertaining reading!



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