the story is very intresting so far the boobs at 44d are to big and with signing a contract 15 pages long is quite something what a way to go he deserves everything he gets

Your storyline is great,I'm looking forward to the next submission. I think alot more should be written on how embarrassed and humiliated stefani is in her new bimbo secretaryposition. I wish I was in her shoes. Keep up the goodwork. Sissi Riki in S. Fl.

A delicious story! How wonderful it would be to be transformed into a luscious, big-haired, big-tittied, updo'd, platinum-blonde Bimbo!

Nice quick moving story with most of the elements that I enjoy the most. I think it would be more stimulating if the sissy wasen't so ready to be who he/she becomes. A litte resistance with some humilating conseqincees could really make this good story great. Thanks.

after part 2:  Kind of takes the fun out of it knowing he wanted the feminization.  No conflict left.  the transformations are described well.

A wonderful story. And i can't wait for more. i do like the concept of very over sized breast balanced on teetering heels and an impossible waist.

You do great with the descriptions, but if i may say, not quite enough with the motives....

thank you

latexslut

Please, at some point in this situation as you continue the story, you might want to explore how he feels at work, to have gone from a management job to having to take secretarial courses and start as a lowly receptionist, working under women who were once his own subordinates, who remind him of his former status.  That is a great and important part of the boss-to-secretary tale, and as well as you've done this so far, I know you can fit it in...

I liked it Steffani, but I wish it went further and had a little more detail.  Like how it felt to the puzzled male.  You did a good job describing the clothing.  Add some more feelings and details then take it though what he was to learn that evening.  However it is your piece, and is good.  My suggestions are just that.  Thank you for your efforts.

Wholeman

This is a really intriguing tale. I love Jezzi's take on the contract and I really think Pervette may be not quite right in the context that Steven did not even look or read the contract presented to him. The writing is very nice and the story line moves quickly. This is an easy read.

I just love how swiftly and easily Steven becomes Steffani. The walk, the mannerisms, the squeezing 12" off his waist first time out, via the corset route was most entertaining and led me to believe that this was not the "first" time Steven had done this "sort of thing" and enjoyed it.

I loved also the little hook at the end when Steffani is confronted by her wife. Absolutely too precious. I just cannot wait for part 2.

Oh, Jezzi has anticipated me once again!  Nevertheless, I'm going
to speak my piece:
.
> "I cannot reveal everything to you until after you sign this
> employment contract..."
.
I don't know where this is taking place, but in the U.S. the law
imposes pretty tight restrictions on what constitutes a legally
enforceable contract, & a contract signed in ignorance, or one that
does not spell out in sufficient detail what he is to do, will not
be enforced by the courts. If he's such a fathead as to think he's
bound by such a contract, he probably *should* be downsized out of
the company.
.
--Pervy

keep up the good work

This guy was not written as stupid, and yet he signs a multi-page contract without reading it???  He deserves what's being done to him, and he must like it, as he's putting up no resistance whatsoever.  

Great so far!  Hope we will be reading "the rest of the story," in the near future.