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Retirement
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/27/09
Bad story.
I didn'tlike!
Silvia.

Comment by Roland on 10/15/09
When two people "just want to hang out with each other," and each one respects Self at the same level as the Other, and the Other at the same level as Self, then it matters little what each one does separately in Life, and they will do with each other what both want to do; it's really that simple.
That's what I read in this story.

Comment by marcus on 11/27/06
Funny how authors think. Here's a wife who tries to make her husband's life a misery and here's the good old husband not holding a grudge. Real life? What's that?

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/20/05
Did he get the breasts removed?  Did he stop taking the pills?  I take it they had stopped sexual activity before the story starts, as no mention was made of the effects of the hormones on his genitals or his sexual performance.  I hope the answers to my questions are both no, and that Angela continues to grow into and enjoy her femininity.   I didn't discover my own till I was 51, so it's never too late.  Angela is actually lucky to have a wife who will support and encourage her.

Comment by juliej on 08/03/05
an intesting it was to easy for him to slip[ into the person he is now things were agreed to with out an argument what a way to enter retirment story but to quick

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/05/05
Good story but in real time he would slam the door on the way to the lawyer.



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