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The Return
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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 01/26/11
I think you don't know nothing about my country. You should have know more about other countries before you write something about it. I think you only know the US and nothing about other countries. Comment by Vivien on 04/24/10 What a wonderful sequel! I enjoyed both the first story and this one too. Both parts were wonderful for that matter. Keep writing ok. Comment by A Brooklyn Reader on 05/13/04 Great job! Really enjoyed your story. You clearly prove that a story can be both tantalizingly erotic and a rip-roaring adventure at the same time. I hope you are very proud of this accomplishment and that you'll consider writing for us again. It was a lot of fun! Thanks. Comment by julie j on 04/13/04 a brilliant story well done i would like to read more about lauras revenge and maybe how she and harold got together in the end you have a lot of possibilities please write some more about this story brilliant well done Comment by Heidi on 04/08/04 Thank you! Wonderful Story. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 04/06/04 FINALLY!!! GREAT JOB! I read "Export" and had the same reaction as you, and wanted to write a sequel. I like being feminine, and I like the hero(ine) to end up enjoying her femininity, but I hate betrayal. I finally ended up focusing on a similar story of kidnap and betrayal, "The Transformation" and ,with the permission of it's author, Anyport, wrote a sequel much like yours titled "I'm Baaack!" - even similar titles. It's here at crystals, but the illustrated version is at Big Closet. If you check it out, let me know what you think. "The Return" ROCKS! Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/06/04 Bloated and boring uh duh ,was this person reading the same storys I was it was Wow 100 % Bloody good. I THOUGHT IT WAS A RIPPING GOOD READ.I loved Export this is just as good if not better than that. Love that Tina shot her face off .Now try it on bitch .I was so in to this story.Boring well if that boring I am worth £ 100,000,000 I don't think I have that in the Bank, so it can't of been boring . I thought it was just great.More please Comment by Mel Inda on 04/06/04 Bloated and boring...kinda like your Hyperboard posts. Comment by Joanna on 04/06/04 This is good,,,, really good, wasn't sure what to expect, but didn't think I'd read something this smooth, without many leaps of fancy, going to the save the next part for another night, thank you |
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