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Comment by Sabrina Wolfe on 01/09/09
I really like the basic form and format of the (Count of Monte Cristo style) way in which you wrote your story. However, i believe that you need an editor. I like your style, though i feel that the previous character in my life that wore this head and the testosterones that bombarded my body before I got my REAL body (I am a postop TS) would have liked it better. i knew i was a female from the age of three, but i still had "that other problem". I am obviously not a writer. I am now in a long term lesbian relationship (six years) with another woman who is a better writer than I am, and is typing this now. Comment by Will It Work on 07/08/05 I have very mixed feelings regarding this story. On the one hand, it is fairly readable, has an interesting take, and could be considered a response to the stroke, femdom, etc. stories which seem to be so common in the TG realm. Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 06/30/05 I enjoyed the story up to a point. While I am all in favor of victims who refuse to be victimized who manage to turn the tables on their captors, the revenge in this story goes a little too far. Lana was traumatized, true, and justice needed to be dealt. The justice handed out in this case was way over the top. There is, however, a certain visceral satisfaction to be derived from seeing the perpetrators hoist on their own petard. Comment by SassySue on 06/26/05 Nice story pf revenge that I agree should be read only after reading Jennifer White's story. Thanks for writing it. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/23/05 Hi Danielle. I took your advice and re-read "Lana Becomes A Girl" before reading your story. I basically liked your story, as I approve of the bad girls and guys getting their cumuppance (misspelling pun intended). However you neglected the bad girl who started the actual changes, Lana herself. you write ... |
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