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Revenge
by: Ashtyn & Cathy Si

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Comment by Your Domain Name on 01/31/17
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Comment by Silvia. on 10/24/10
It's a bad story!

Comment by julie on 03/04/04
this story is a bit heavy for me but well written

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 09/13/02
This was a good story, but as I was reading the final scene, I thought it was going to end differently.  Tommy would grab the stick still held by Harry/Maria and would become Tommy/Maria.  Harry/Tommy and Maria/Harry would then inadvertantly kill each other in their struggle.  Tommy/Maria would then have to adjust to "her" new life.



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