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Revenge is Sweet
by Jennifer

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Comment by Stephanie Reacts on 05/18/22
Would of been better if their was more parts to this story, and seen if he got to London and if the girls where waiting on him at London or how his mother would react seeing him dressed as a baby girl.

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Comment by i love pron on 12/19/18
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Comment by suba analuba on 08/12/18
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Comment by Mike on 01/30/18
But how sad was Fiona after he took his revenge by pouring acid on the bitches face?

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by link building on 09/07/13
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Comment by juliej on 05/05/08
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 08/02/07
a brilliant story i just love the way the girls waited for their revenge brilliant well done

Comment by Peg Thebois on 07/02/07
*giggles* What a great little tale of revenge.  I'll bet after he finally gets home he will be much more respectful and will remember who is the stronger sex.  It's just too bad the girls didn't get any pictures as a souvenir.

Comment by Baby Jennifer on 03/11/07
Another great story, the hapless hero is quickly reduced to a helpless object and then humiliated in public.  Some makeup would have been perfect, it's not like he would be able to remove it!  Any maybe a big sign round his neck saying 'Hi, I'm baby Mike doing a charity sit-out for twelve hours - please do not release me until 9pm!'

Jennifer, can you email me please, the yahoo address I have for you is getting no response?  babyjennifer@hushmail.com


Comment by Nellie D on 02/17/07
The ending was too cruel for a simple payback story. With no note of explanation or a way to talk, he had no defense or protection.  Oh, it was well crafted with good writing except it seems,  the limited range of character names.

Comment by Nicola on 02/13/07
Fantastic story, thanks for posting it! - N.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/12/07
Needs a part 2 - What adventures await "her"?  I would have liked to see a more thourough transformation, hair removal,  doll-like makeup, rumba panties and petticoats .  Also, some way for the girls to keep an eye on him and film him.

Comment by marsha on 02/12/07
a very nice and exciting story  for this person who ends up in diapers and made to be a sweet baby girl.hopefully you will find a way to write more of the same as i am a baby girl myself or at least that is how i feel like

Comment by David Probert on 02/12/07
Mike Chapman does not seem to have learned his lesson - he was treated to petticoat punishment at primary school, said he'd learnt his lesson when he went to secondary school but here he is at 14 still making a nuisance of himself.

Comment by Bondwriter on 02/12/07
This is another nice petticoat punishment story, Jennifer. The whole set-up is well done, since this awful bully's shenanigans are really both stupid and mean. And his taunting the girls and making fun of them does ask for some retaliation. Does the punishment fit the crime? His feelings are more likely to be hurt than him, and he doesn't fall prey to some unsavoury pervert, so it's just a tale of being taught a lesson, I guess.



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