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The Reward
by Lidija Jay

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Comment by Janis on 09/26/23
Wish you'd written more stories,absolutely well written,and a beautiful story

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 07/22/09
you're an artist, writing lovely and sweet stories, keep writing this way, because you're pretty good on it.
Hugs and kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Cindy on 12/30/08
Hi what a lovely story,'whew' I loved it. PLEASE write more, the only thing missing was, the use of pretty feminine aprons, not enough storys include pretty aprons, and you don,t need to be a maid, to wear pretty aprons, plastic aprons are a plus. JUST A THOUGHT. CINDY

Comment by Briar on 10/29/08
Hard to believe that nobody has already commented on your wonderful fantasy.  This is a classical love story, like that of Abelard and Heloise, or of Persephone whose return from hell was frustrated when her lover looked back when she stumbled on the steps back up to the earth.

That it had to be a dream however vivid was forced on you because in these rational times no longer can we suspend our disbelief so well - if it was magical it would not have worked so well.  But what a cathartic tale you have written.  I am so very impressed, also with the way you wove the erotic with the romantic.

Bravo.




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