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The Reward of Arrogance
by Jennifer

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Comment by Kaylan on 12/12/11
Got it! Thanks a lot again for heiplng me out!

Comment by gj on 08/29/10
a cute punishment for a bully,and a nice open end...leaves to othe imagination.

Comment by Different Anonymous on 01/11/09
I enjoyed this but really think you should have continued it. For all of this to leading up to him stuck there as a little girl to suddenly end only a couple paragraph later is pretty disappointing.

Comment by Anonymous. on 03/03/08
Eh. Even if I enjoyed reading it, it was still like reading yet another remake. The same. The major change here was body-transformation, but what about everything else? Even the dialogue is redundant. Jennifer, I'm your fan. You are obviously skilled at writing, and it's a disappointment to see you not taking full advantage of it by trying something new. Prom night, Wedding dresses, even another "Diaper, little girls" story that doesn't feel like dejavú all the way. PLEASE.

Comment by Jazzy on 03/02/08
Nice story and well written. I always enjoy magical transformation stories.

I wouldn't have used "Stuck" as one of the categories though. As far as I know that's usually only used when the transformed person has no way of turning back and is forced to live out his/her life that way, not when it's only going to be 3 weeks...

The setting, with the 2 rivalling magical schools in one town, definitely seems like a great recipe for more magical mayhem. So perhaps it would be nice to re-visit this universe in another story someday...




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