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Rewritten
by Julie O

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Comment by gj on 08/29/10
A nice peice of work. The moderatly passed change works well.Although if there was more resistence and less imedate acceptence it might of been a bit more interesting.But all in all good work-kept me hooked till the end..
Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/05/04
Dear Julie:

Once again, you have reaffirmed your place among my favorite writers.  Your technique just gets better and better.  This was a very compelling, and as always with your work, visual read.  I think it would have been interesting to learn a bit more about the character of Kristy's two lovers.  Being familiar with your writing, I caught on fairly early that the "you" in question would turn out to be Iona, and I was glad I was right,

Love & huggles,
Sheryl S.
Comment by dave on 01/03/04
A good short story.
It reads very well, bit I don't know why.

I don't think its the characters, and I don't think they are really well drawn.

I think it is in the first third of the story.
It sets everything up so well that the narrative just flows from then
on - yes I think that's it !

Very clever and well done
Comment by Hayls on 01/03/04
A well written story. The character development was very real, especially for a magical transformation story. A nice piece of work!


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