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Richard The III
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Comment by Mariah on 04/24/13
A great story that really felt like it was happening in real life until at the very end when Ken entered the restaurant dressed as a Knight...that was a touch much, it seemed to kill the reality. I was happy for Gwen when her father accepted her and Ken told her that he knew of her past but loved her for who she is now. I wish Gwen all the very best...she has earned it! Comment by Leslie on 08/27/09 A girl by accident? Sometimes it just happens this way, like falling off a cliff and finding oneself in Heaven. Comment by Antonia on 02/15/09 Definitely the nicest story I have read so far on this website. Very good, convincing story, no rampant sex or foreplay, no magic, and no strange goings-on. Quite charming. Very well done. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/07/08 Cute story along your usual lines, but the crusading English king was Richard I (the Lion-Hearted), not Richard III, who was depicted by Shakespeare as a deformed, monstrous ruler. (That's untrue, presumably, but a musical featuring him sounds like somebody's answer to Mel Brooks' Springtime for Hitler.) Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/10/07 Great story Janet! Garrett becomes Gwen for the play, but finds te role to be his new life. What's interesting is no mention of breast forms or panty girdle,only a corset. Janet a part 2 is needed here. I believe this is a fantasy tale too. |
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