Very, very, BAD story.

Wonderful story Thank you so much for sharing your great talnet I hope to read more on this series love to find out how it comes out at Sturgess
Deep Curtsy
Ana

Ah and sigh.

For lack of new chapters, I went and read the comments on Fictionmania.

The mystery of the unfinished story was revealed.

On FM the duplicate chapter did not appear. The numbering got rearranged and the last chapter we have here never got posted over there.

An overly persistant critic spoiled the joy of the writing for the author. Warning the writing would stop if the annoying posts did not.  The story ended.

And I learned what it was that so attracts me to these storys.
The characters are vulnerable.  And the author knows how to write them that way because they are vulnerable too.

I noticed there is a new comment on Andy's training. Cissykay you might wish to read that. You have more than one appreciative fan.

Ah.
I've started revisiting this story.  I enjoyed reading it the first (and second ) time. And my curiosity is still active as to how it will turn out.

I total trust the author to take good care of her characters after her other story, Andy's training.

This one seems to have written itself into a corner.  August (2008) will be the 5th anniversity of its posting.  

Is that enough time for CissyKay to work out how to paint a door out of the corner?

I add my request to the others for the missing chapter (or its explaination) and more episodes to complete the story.

Good authors are hard to find.

Cheers -Jynjer

When are more chapters coming?

Thank you so much for the series of stories. I read them for the first time about 6 months ago and then forgot the author's name and was so sad to not be able to return and reread. Please have more episodes with Cheryl taking charge of Sissyslut and increasing his humiliation and his submissiveness. I envy his experiences and hope to read about more adventures of "Riding Bitch".

Parts Six and Seven are the same on Crystal's Site and Fictionmania.

I thought the story was over and done. Lo and behold a new episode is here. The new chapter still has the clarity of image that shows all the excesses of domination, and the endurance of the protagonist. The slave may be most fouly treated, but never gets to own the shame, the shame is always that of the slave owner. The top only thinks herself superior to the bottom, that which shows endurance and maintains solid character when abused is the greater. For some reason seeing the author's characters as what he depicts them greatly upsets him. But then writer's of talent are often eccentric to the point of distraction.

I love this story.  Hopefully Part 11 will be posted soon.

Vanessa

Love the briefness of each episode.  Let's me savor the anguish that Andy had to endure.  Let me tell you, a defiant attitude towards a Mistress can cost you dearly.  My Mistress put me through a sample of her correction techniques just so I'd know what to expect.  I always thought the sampling was much more intense than she applied to her hourly/session guests.  I'd like to be in Andrea's shoes though, it's just the situation a good slave just loves.  I'm not sure about the wedding though, isn't that like capitulating to a male - I'm lesbian oriented myself.   Luv   Rachel Rae

Hey, nice story.  Now that you have me all interested, are you ever going to finish it?  Or have I missed Chapter 11?  The Last I found was Chapter 10 from August 2003.  Please.  Pretty please.  Pretty please with Melanie on top.

i read during last summer axiously awaiting each chapter. but i left for vacation and when i returned i had lost my hard drive..... i finally am back and found You again... i was looking forword to the end <pout> pleaseeeee finish this  i am sure i am not the only oine waiting ... thank You for all that You have written so far

One great story, but missing one part.
Chapters 5 & 6 are the same.  One of those
chapters appears to be missing.
Thanks,

Just finished part 10 and so far your story is progressing well except I hope you don't overdo Ken's gallantry too much.  Such behavior smacks of good ol' Southern boys or cavaliers who think they are only helping women because females are the weaker sex.  Melanie, as depicted so far, is definitely not in tune with the idea of the "weaker vessel".

I too don't want to see Ken become a broken sissy sub.  Instead, I visualize him as a virile stallion who needs to be tamed and gentled by the knowing hands of a female domme.  A real mistress would love to ride the stallion (not a gelding) that she has gentled just as she loves to ride her two-wheeled hawg.  He needs to learn to respond to her wishes and demands.

Keep up your good story.

after part 10
I am just the opposite of Billie-jo; I hope it is Melanie who changes.  I would like to see him end up liking being a girl but he and Melanie to get together as equals.  I go with Lincoln, "Just as i would not be a slave, so I would not be a master.", and Bill and Ted, "Be excellent to each other and party on, dudes."  He seems like he has really changed from the arrogant macho asshole of the beginning of the story into a pretty nice guy (Why?  gotta be in that missing chapter 5 ) and I would hate to see him become a broken sissy sub;  I actually think Melanie really wouldn't like him anymore if he did.

On a lighter note, I can't wait to see/experience the high maintaience hairdo Melanie will require him to get, maybe a prom updo or somesuch - Will she make him go into the local town salon and request it as if he really wants it ???

Wonderful wonderful story
a real submissives dream
and still a lot of days torment to go before they reach Sturgess
Sally

If Melanie needs a secretary for her company I think I have a candidate...

I just love your stories but the riding bitch series is your best so far.  It's about time that a good writer picked up that female bikers need submissives riding behind them.  Personally, I hope Ken really learns to accept his sissyslut side.  As a Femme Domme, and because of your story, I'm starting to dream about a female biker club and finding my own sissyslut.

Keep up the good work.

After part 8, I really miss the real part 5, as it sure seems that it must have contained a really traumatic event that has caused a turning point in the attitude of all the characters that has changed the direction of the story

Knowing these bitches, they'll get 5o miles from Sturgis, drive off into the desert and leave him there, handcuffed and shackled. They'll send the film anyways -- you can't trust ANY woman, and he should've known that!

Dear Ms. Kay,

I think you are trying to fool us girls by posting parts 5 & 6 as the same part.

Yvette loves your writing and is eagerly awaiting for the next part.

Hugs & Curtseys,

Yvette

I've tried to continue with this, and I do think you write it well. But this premise gets too over the top in places. I've read that some of these type initiations go on in the biker world, but it begins to get too far out there, to the point of being almost cartoonish as opposed to fiction.  It's like seeing how outrageous and grotesque one can make each chapter.  You've lost me.

I thought they were just setting him up.  Why is he worried about everyone seeing the film?  Knowing what they have planned for him, and after what he has to do in public during the day, he's sure to make the 6:OOpm news and be ruined anyway. "Freedom's just another word for nothing left to lose"  If Melanie or cheryl is driving, I'd think he'd try to wreck the bike, killing himself and taking the bitch with him.  Also, I know you said you didn't do gay, but given what they are doing to him and their goal, the fact that they would be concerned  about preserving his male heterosexuality just doesn't ring true; is there a special reason for their doing so?   Your writing is very good  and I'm looking forward to part 8, to see what those bitches will do next.  I still hope he gets a chance for revenge; I don't see much hope for them eventually getting to like each other, which would be my first choice.

Chapter six is Chapter five. I believe you loaded up the wrong chapter when it was loaded.

This is a great story and i look forward to each chapter, but today's chapter 6 is a repeat of chapter 5.  i hope that the real chapter 6 will be posted soon, and i hope that the chapters keep coming. i am looking forward to it.
        Thank you
           daphne girl

I love this series and look forward to each installment.  Consequently, I was disappointed that part 6 is a duplicate of part 5. When can I read the real part 6 - she asked wistfully.

Part 5 and part 6 as posted are the same. How about posting the real part 5?

After part 5
There seems to be a gap between part 4 and 5.  Not only is what happens during the night left out, but there also seems to be a major change in both his and Cheryl and Melanie's attitudes and behavior - for the better all around, I'd say - that indicates something major did happen.  

Cheryl said that she didn't see a feminine side in Sissy, but there certainly seems to be one coming out in this part.  I hope they are really changing toward "her" and that he is coming to like being "her", but I would put my money on either that they are setting him up for something that makes what already has happened to him seem good or that they are simply using carrot and stick to get him to be an obedient sissy and like it.

Great story. I can't wait for each added part.

There seems to be something missing between part 4 & 5. Was something skipped?

A well written work is putting it mildly.  But part 5 confuses me-- it seems anti-climactic, or at least, incongruent with the build-up.  For one thing, it was kinda neat to hear the macho jerk insist he isn't a sissy or a submissive, and looking forward to his public humiliation once broken.  But is seems he's already accepted this, all without much fanfare.  Too bad, it was going so well in that direction.

If part 6 continues in the same direction as parts 1-4, I'll look forward to further reading.  If not, I'll probably stop reading stories submitted in parts altogether.

Great writing, nevertheless.

Hugz,
ash

Story had much potential and build up in parts one and two, but it has gone downhill quickly. Sorry to say so, but it is true.

after part 4:  You are doing an excellent job of making a macho asshole jerk into a sympathetic character and the women as the villians.  I am so much rooting for him to stick it out and, while not becoming a sissy, become a strong, independant woman.  I hope "she" finds a way to make Cheryl "her" bitch.

I would like to thank those who have taken the time to comment on the story. As you can see by the remarks, everyone seems to think that the suspect where it will go. You will all just have to read on. I will make one comment though for you who have suggested that Ken be punished by one or more male bikers. I am sorry to disappoint you, but if you have read my other works, it should be obvious that I never use a gay theme in my stories. Sorry boys and girls. I would like to get feedback from any female dommes that happen to read my work. If you're out there, please drop me a line. Thanks again to all,

I am enjoying this story immensely.  I also believe that there are a lot of possibilities where you can take this story, and the suspense is killing me.  He was told that he would get to experience how women riders are treated and I truly hope he gets the full experience to include being truly being "bitch ridden" by some biker stud and having his tongue stud rubbing the length of some studs dick.
My only surprise here is that it seems that he gave in sort of quickly...I'd expect that he would still try to get away.  What leader of a biker club would not literally choose death before letting himself be dressed in true bitch fashion and ride into a place where all his boys are.
I think he would at least try one escape attempt...and fail...and the punishment might be to take him to a biker bar all tricked out and allowed to go on his own way.  Then watch the fun begin.
I hope to read a lot more of your work.


xoxoxo
Stefani V.

WOW.  Nasty women.  He was a jerk, true, but no one deserves this.  These women make Ilsa koch look like an amateur.   I don't think he will survive, but "she" might.  My guess is she will be an odedient little sissy slut in body and mind by the time this is over and beg Melanie to let her ride bitch with her.  OR  they'll be so amazed she  survives, they'll give her a choice to go back to "his" club or get SRS and become a full domme member of theirs.  Would there be any doubt as to her choice :-)  OR  Not realizing how femme he has become, at the end of the bet period he elects to go back to his club only to find they make "her" the club bitch.  Lots of possibilities.

Good use of suspense and mystery.  The story could go anywhere from here, but it looks like it is going to be good.  Can't wait for the next part.  I can tell you are going to be one of my favorite authors here.

-Ami