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Comment by Andrea on 01/14/03
Atrocious spelling and grammar. Littered with disjointed sentences. There appears to be a thread of incorrect verb and noun placings which have the effect of disintegrating what might have been a cute little tale. My advice? Go to nightschool and learn how to write and express your thoughts in a comprehensible way!
Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/13/03
Short and too the point. Remind me of some of our E-mail conversations to one another over the holidays. As the movie title goes IT'S A WONDERFUL LIFE. Be as fem as you care to be.
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