A nice story with lots of public interaction from the position Rita held at the newspaper.

I really enjoyed this story, the simple progression from a boy that liked to dress to becoming a woman full time. Rita' progress from a scared boy into a beautiful young woman is paced quickly as she adopts the female side that she has always tried to hide.
There is only thing that spoils this story and that is the grammer and tense, it makes the story flow jerk and trip.

Example: "I had been wearing the new corset for a few days to get used to it, and now I could pull the laces tight by herself. I was down to 126 pounds now, and with the special panty and the corset, I had a 36-22-36 figure."

The story flips back and forth like this all the time, it spoils the flow and the story

Sorry, hate being so critcal.

What a love story!! Rita become a woman, finds true love, all because her mom knew she wanted to be a woman in real life. Mom know's best and this story proves it. Now if you continue this story, will Rita find out what was done for her?

An interesting and lovely written story. I liked the way the mother had put her plan into action for her son/daughter. Not much is given in the story until the end that gives away the ultimate plan that she had hatched with her life long friend. The works of this prolific writer is an insperation to me and should be to all who feel the need to write something. Take some time and read some of Janet's stories, she has something for everyone's taste.