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LN2p1V Precisely what I was looking for, thanks for posting.

JWWGRF Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

where tht heck is pt 3 ???????????????

GREAT BEGINNING, BUT THESE STORIES WHICH JUST TEASE A READER AND GO
NOWHERE ARE VERY DISAPPOINTING.

my voice is that  its a very good story but please continue with the next part of this great story maybe with a few twists etc in it well done

I will add my voice.  I love the story and would really love a continuation.  Thank you for what you have written so far.  You are obviously stuck as to where to go with it - or you have passed away. In either event, I am so sorry. If it is the former- I can help you I think.  Write and we can chat.
Hugs
Mandee

Wellllll. I saw the story.  I read the story.  I lked the story.  Now where is the end of the story?
Is this another case where a writer gets an idea and writes out of it? Is it possible the writer never intended to go any further?
Or is this one of those teases a writer does to get a reader hooked and to have the story posted by "popular demand"?  I am disappointed.  A writer with this much talent discards it and walks away.  Although, I should be careful. The writer may have problems and cannot get back to the writing.  In that case, I profoundly and humbly appologize.  Thank you for sharing the parts that you were able.

wonderful!!! When is part three coming.

Aw, c'mon! Now that I'm hooked, you just gotta do part 3. Really enjoyable style.

what you have written shows great potential, don't quit on it. It's been months since you've added to it. Surely you have thoughts of where you want this story to go. The joy is in the journey. Why wait.

Where's the rest ???   Please continue the story!   I love the way it has been going so far - This is my dream for my self!

Thanks for a wonderful story can't wait to enjoy and chuckle with the next part.

excellant I eagrly await the next part of your story thankyou for sharing this with us

A superb second part. Please now bring on the next.

Tintinabulation.  That word has a nice ring!  I'll think about it, as I look forward to the third moiety.

Much love to a clevel, clever rascal.

Jill

A fine addition to the first part.

Not only do I love Sweet/Sentimental and non-coercive stories,
but I am an easy mark for wry humor.  Though I'd love to have
read about the party, too, the immediate story feels complete.
It's a keeper.

Deni

Really nothing to add to all the other plaudits.  I'm very happy to
see that there's going to be more.  I LOVE sweet/sentimental
feminization stories.

Pervy

Aoife- thanks for a well-written first story.  Did your wife actually make that beautiful creature enclosing you go to the party dressed that way?  Thanks for a sweet, sentimental story; it's so rare.  Please continue.

KR

The story was advertised as "Sweet/Sentimental".  And, it was.  Very!

Wonderful job!  

Delightful!

Please let us know what has happened to the 'beautiful' creature.

Love,

Jill

Nice job Aoife!  More please!!

An interesting short story that feels like it is the beginning of something much larger. The writing is very good with no typos or wrong words to cause any momentary pauses as the reader ponders what is intended. Please continue the adventure.

Simple but elegant story. I wish that my wife would have me do the same. Thank You

Sweet and very enjoyable.  I hope there is more and please continue with the writing.  

I agree with the first reader.  Good start, but I do hope there will be more to this adventure.

A great story for the first attempt. Is there going to be a second part, if so bring it on.