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Roadside Attraction
by Slothrop

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Comment by Bruce on 10/16/09
At first I teared up with sadness but near the end you managed to change my face to a smile. Thanks

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/10/07
TYRONE, THIS CUTE STORY REALLY DOES SHOW THAT YOU CAN MAKE YOUR WEAKNESS INTO A STRENGTH. POOR TERRY, DEVELOPING THE BODY OF A WOMAN IS HELL FOR THE TEEN, BUT HIS GIRLFRIEND JOELLE COMFORTS HIM. IN TIME HE FINDS DRESSING AS TERRI TO BE NOT ONLY ACCEPTED BY THE TOWN, BUT ENCOURAGED SINCE HIS BODY IS MORE GIRL THAN BOY. WEARING THE SEXY WAITRESS UNIFORM GIVES HIM EXPERIENCE IN WHAT WOMEN GO THROUGH. HE MAKES THE SACRIFICE OF BECOMING THE FILLER "ROADSIDE ATTRACTION" TO SAVE THE TOWN. NOW AFTER THE TOWN IS SAVED, TERRI STILL LIVES TO HELP OTHERS. ME, I THINK HE ENJOYS HIS BODY. I AM SURE THAT JOELE DOES.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/03/04
Great Story my dear

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 03/30/04
I enjoyed this story, in part because I had Gynecomastia as a teen.  I never developed beyond the bump stage, and nothing was done to correct it.  But I do believe it had an influence on my lifelong love of feminine clothing.  And I still have these lovely little bumps.  :-)
This story is told with warmth and compassion.  And it reminds me of the little town that was just south of the Air Force Base I was stationed at.  It didn't have a booby boy, but some of the characters in this story would have fit right in.
Thanks for a well-written and enjoyable tale.

Comment by Joe Feldman on 03/30/04
I really loved your story.  It was tender to the n/th degree.  Please keep up the good work.  I enjoyed your other stories just as much.  Respectfully Joe



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