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Role Rehearsal
by J. R. Anthony

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Comment by PATTY on 09/09/22
great story I hope she gets brave and gets a complete love for her new self

Comment by  ALISON MARY on 09/09/09
Come now,JR,get that word processor going again and continue a great
 story.Don't leave us in suspense.Promises  to be a lovely,romantic
story and thankyou so much .May God bless you.ALISON

Comment by TerriThomas on 04/29/07
Hello JR....I love the sentiment of your story and I hope that Julia will follow her heart's direction.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Comment by Rose on 04/18/07
Hi J R.
      I loved this first part and hope that you continue to bring julia to the fore. Can't wait for the next part.

Luv

Rose.


Comment by Starhawk on 04/18/07
I like this story.  I will point out a few edits that need to be made.  First, there are a couple of places where Julia is referred to as Julie.  Easy fix there.  Also Joseph accepts his role as Julia a bit too easily.  I think there should be a bit more turmoil when a guy first crossdresses.  He may like it and all, but emotionally there should be some kind of conflict.  Plus, conflict makes for a better storyline IMHO.

Anyway, good job so far.  I look forward to the next installment.


Comment by Momo on 04/17/07
Good start.  I hope there will be more.



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